http://efimg.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] efimg.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rezoner 2013-10-29 06:06 pm (UTC)

Здорово написано.

Это ляп? В самом конце продолжения:
– Ммм... подождите-ка. Я, кажется знаю. – Крис глянул краем глаза влево.
Почему влево? Он же ведет машину, значит, она - справа?
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